Mix up resposes and art histories so the examiner can really see how you are thinking about what the artist is doing and why they are doing it. And also so they know you're not just sticking things down "because it looks nice". Make sure your art has a purpose and relates to the topic!
The brown church is a monoprint usung chalk rather than printing ink.
Fold outs are a great way of getting the examiner involved in your book and getting them interested. It shows that your book is full of work and exploding with ideas.